First, second and third days.

[sarey]

The first day

 

Resisting was hard,

but the temptations soon disappeared,

I drowned them in liquid,

for the hunger to leave.

 

As the hours went by,

exercising, I did,

for hours on end,

for the fat, the calories to rid.

 

As night soon came,

I fell fast asleep, with only one sound,

a stomach growling,

but a proud mind.

 

The second day

 

Waking in hunger,

a monster in my stomach,

stepping out of bed,

with dizziness surrounding.

 

Arriving downstairs,

I peek in the fridge,

the food awaits,

but I won't let it win.

 

Exercises, I do,

repeatively and more,

stopping for water,

but returning,

regardless I'm sore.

 

That evening my mum returns,

asks 'Want to come food shopping'?

I think about it for long,

and decide to come along.

 

Looking and staring,

all around me,

the temptations of food,

I wish they'd leave.

 

Returning home,

putting the food away,

trying to resist,

to bed I astray.

 

Sleeping with the hunger,

my heart beating fast,

shaking, my hands,

the day is over,

at last.

 

Day three

 

Awake, I am,

stepping out of bed,

falling to the floor,

the dizziness took over,

grabbing to the door,

pulling myself up,

I take a deep breath,

and prepare myself,

for the day ahead...

 

 

 

Yeah. Just a poem I did. Just to express myself right this moment...

[Jeen]

I cant write poems mine sounds crappy when I read this. It is good.

 

 

Thanks

[Censored]

Nice Sarey,

 

Hey Jeen, Poems can't sound crappy as we read them how we want to read them. Please post 'em.

[sarey]

Thanks you two

 

And yeah, Jeen, it's not about how 'nice' it sounds, it's about the words you use, the effort you put into it, the feeling, emotion, that stuff, not how good it is, so post.

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Sarey you are an amazingly talented girl, and i mean that. I love this poem, it hits close to home, thankyou for writing how i feel.