AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 Yups its not great i know, but i was thinking about someone when i wrote it, yeah yeah i'm a dork i know. Watching the way you turn your head, That cute little smile, Your eyes such a beautiful blue, These feelings are just so true, They can't fade, No these emotions will stay, Even after you run away. So tonight i ask, Please don't run away just yet, Can't you stay, Just a little while longer, Hold me in your arms once again. I can tell what your thinking, Just a glance in your direction, Lets me know what your wishing, Lets me know how you feel, I see through you, You see through me, But the day will come, You leave for the last time. So tonight i ask, Please don't run away just yet, Can't you stay, Just a little while longer, Hold me in your arms once again. Do you remember your card game phase, That dorky shirt you loved so much, What about that first girl, Who broke your heart, But made you stronger, I remember, I remember and always will, How i held your hand, And made you laugh, Don't you walk away. So tonight i ask, Please don't run away just yet, Can't you stay, Just a little while longer, Hold me in your arms once again. ohh tonight i ask, Hold me in your arms once again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zackinlaw Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 Nice poem on infatuation!!! Zack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ButterflyWrists Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 Good poem. I can almost see it happening. See that poem out loud, like a scene being played. well done. Hardly any poems make me do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mercyplz Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 nicely written...=) tho it's sad... keep it up..god bless you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 14, 2007 Author Share Posted October 14, 2007 Haha thankyou all. I have always wondered how i end up with more comments are the pieces i don't like.. Ahhh well its always nice to read what people think of your writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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