Honesty Posted October 5, 2007 Share Posted October 5, 2007 Just to point out this is not relating to me. It's my own observations and the world surrounding me. I'll be recording this this weekend. My music is not intended to hurt or anything like that..it's my way of expression and it is a subject close to my heart. This is verse 2 of 3 verses..I chose not to post the whole song. The song is about 2 bullies..this is verse 2. So it gets worse..I'll tell you about bully number two, He said one day ''I know life's hard, let me make it fun for you''.. And at that point my vulnerability wouldn't have guessed.. That he'd proceed to take every bit of childhood I had left, First he put his hand on my thigh, then he let out a sigh.. And said if I told anybody about this then I'd die.. But death can't be worse than this, life hurts like hell.. As he gets closer all I can breathe is his dirty smell.. I try to break free from all his squeezing and stroking, But he pins me down on the floor and says it's me that's provoked him.. I mean what the hell..is it me, am I the reason he's pokin? Is it my fault that he's sweating, heavy breathing and moaning.. All feeling and groping..now I'm frightened as hell, He reaches down in a hurry and untightens his belt.. And as I scream..he tells me not to cry, to stay calm.. He shoves a gag around my mouth and he ties up my arms.. Then he pulls my top up..and he just stares and he grins, Tells me there's so much to do he don't know where to begin.. And at that point nothing in the world's as scary as him.. Then there's the most EXCRUCIATING pain as he TEARS at me SKIN! Burnt between my legs so bad, I was afraid I was dying.. He's pushing and groaning..and I'm shaking and crying.. Feel like I'm drowning in his sweat, I can't breathe..he's suffocating me.. God if you exist, please show yourself this man is RAPING me.. But no he kept going til he was done, then rolled off of me.. But even now as I write I can still feel him on top of me.. I remember all his licking and gruntin..his * * * * *ing and thrusting.. And the feeling he gave me of feeling sick and disgusting. But this wasn't a one off.. or one bad mistake.. If we're alone, any chance he has, he'll take.. PLEASE, Someone help, stop me feeling lonely and scared.. But it's pointless hoping, coz I know that nobody cares. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 This is an amazing verse. I would love to hear the others sometime, but i understand if you chose not to share them. You have a way with your words, this made me tear up. Continue writing and singing if thats what you do because this is so powerful and needs to be spoken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Honesty Posted October 8, 2007 Author Share Posted October 8, 2007 Thankyou very much. There's been a lot of views but hardly any replies. It's a taboo subject but happens every day. I'm actually in the process of recording this and putting it on my demo CD. Thanks for looking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 I know in the society it seems to be shut up a bit and it shouldn't be. Its a horrible crime thats effecting so many people, not only in the short term but in the long term. I notice that sometimes too with the views. Maybe people can't be bothered posting, but at least they read it i suppose. I'm really glad you posted it to be honest. It really brought a tear to my eye. I hope the cd works out well, the best of luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Honesty Posted October 12, 2007 Author Share Posted October 12, 2007 Aww..that's so nice! Thankyou very much. *Hug* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HunnyBunny Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 That was an amazing poem which did indeed make me really want to cry..but i myself find it very very hard to as i hav been through some of that things you have...thanks for sharing it it was beautiful xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pocket Rocket Posted October 16, 2007 Share Posted October 16, 2007 This is verywell written, and for the record hun, I care, and there are many people here who care too. Is this still happening to you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Honesty Posted October 17, 2007 Author Share Posted October 17, 2007 Hey Pocket Rocket. Thankyou for caring and taking the time to read and reply..but this rhyme is not about me. It's a made up rhyme that I know happens all the time. Thanks anyway, appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pocket Rocket Posted October 17, 2007 Share Posted October 17, 2007 Ah I see, I tend to do the same when I write. Keep 'em coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Honesty Posted October 19, 2007 Author Share Posted October 19, 2007 I shall. It's good to try and write about situations that don't necessarily relate to yourself. Thanks for your response anyway, I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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