AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 With the moon shining, Making even the darkness of the night, Seem so beautiful, Seem so bright. To her corner she runs, Her little safe place, She cannot escape, Tears trickle down her face. Where there used to be happiness, You now find fear, What used to bring joy, Now creates more then a single tear. She just can’t explain, Her once hidden fear, Is now out in the open, Is now just so clear. Yet the reasons to why, She runs for her life, Tries to hide away, Her only friend an old rusty knife. Are hidden away, Her memories show, Just a glimpse of what happened, She screams at him to “GET AWAY, PLEASE JUST GO!” He shuts the door, But on the inside or the out, She just can’t remember, If turned about. She remembers him whispering, In her sweet ear, Just fives years old, But he got so near. He told her to stay calm, That it wouldn’t hurt, He told her to lift up her arms, He removed her small shirt. She was scared and alone, Mummy was bed ridden, Hospital had her hostage, To leave the house was forbidden. Where was she to go? Oh what she to do, She was five years old, And mummy trusted you. So as she remembers, The door handle was your last touch, But her memories have been blocked, The fears consume so much. They have taken my life, Nightmares each night, You’re in my thoughts, Your everywhere and I don’t know how to fight. Why won’t the fog clear? I want to see freely once more, I want to know what happened, No wondering, I want to know for sure. Did you leave the way I wanted you to, Or did you simply close me in, Did you turn away, Or was I another plot to your deadly sin. Mummy now says your evil, I wonder if she knows the truth, Should I trust you? For that I have no clue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 I loved it, very powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 4, 2007 Author Share Posted October 4, 2007 Thankyou Sarey.. This one means alot to me. To be honest it doesn't bother me if everyone hates it. Its just my words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 I don't think anyone could hate it, it's very powerful. You've a wonderful talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 5, 2007 Author Share Posted October 5, 2007 Thankyou it means alot coming from you, you have amazing words in your poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 5, 2007 Share Posted October 5, 2007 Lol, not as amazing as yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 6, 2007 Author Share Posted October 6, 2007 No more amazing Mwahahaha lol i shall win this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 Lol, You shant. Your poems are powerful girl. Now shush. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 6, 2007 Author Share Posted October 6, 2007 So are yours, fine about about this, they are to different to compare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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