comfyshoes Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 this smoke screen is nothing compared to your vanishing tricks my strutting is nothing compared to the spiritual licks you gave to the right side of my head breaking me down is nothing compared to what i want to do you instead give me that challenging smile again give me that self deceiving line you've rehearsed a thousand times give me the impossible the most illogical of doubts and watch me crush them in my trembling hands watch me turn my fears into the sand dune of time watch me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
comfyshoes Posted October 4, 2007 Author Share Posted October 4, 2007 third poem with no comments... is my writing really that bad? *sniff* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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