sarey Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 Alone Do you ever feel so alone? That tears fall, as you watch others laugh, wishing you could be, just like that, but realizing, it'll never come true. Do you ever feel so alone? That everyday you pray, for someone to kill you, or to fade away, rather than live this life, astray. Do you ever feel so alone? That all it ever is, is you, yourself, all on your own, that even if someone comes along, you feel so cold and so alone. Do you ever feel so alone? That even in a crowded room, you feel you have no one, even with voices speaking, all around you, you feel so empty, so lonely. Do you ever feel so alone? That at night, you curl up, wishing to fade away, rather than to feel this, lonliness and pain. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissPotter Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 But, sometimes don't you think it's good to be alone? I mean to gain more prespective in your life and to find yourself, to love yourself better. Sometimes it's better to be in love with yourself first before you can love others. I'm a loner, always proud to be one. But, deep down inside that I know, I only need to look for one guy to make me happy someday so why worry and even though I can only count the number of friends I have with less than one hand, I know that they are real friends and not fake ones. Is it so bad to be alone? Sometimes it's not loneliness that you feel but more than your heart telling you maybe there is something even better out there for you if you only had faith and sometimes being alone has its advantages for a person to realize these things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 3, 2007 Author Share Posted October 3, 2007 Well, it's not good to be alone if the circumstances are as they are in the poem I have represented here. Being alone, for me, is how I expressed through that poem. When others laugh, I cry. When others smile, I frown. When I'm all alone, I pray, hoping someone, somewhere, will kill me. I'm that desperately alone, that I wish I was never born. Though there are other reasons for my existence wanting to be disappeared, this is one of them. I've been in relationships, I still felt so alone. Friendships I've been in, currently am in, I still feel so alone. I feel cold, lost, lonely. It's horrible. It's not good. It doesn't gain any perspective of my life. If it does, it's not any good to me. The questions asked here were hypothetical also. Just so people know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gecko Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 But, sometimes don't you think it's good to be alone?Totally missing the point. Very expressive poem, sarey. Each verse jumped out at me in recognition... I know how you feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 4, 2007 Author Share Posted October 4, 2007 Thankyou Gecko, I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan250 Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 Are you really 14? Impressive... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 5, 2007 Author Share Posted October 5, 2007 Uhu. Really 14 lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girl friend Posted October 6, 2007 Share Posted October 6, 2007 Have u got depression kiddo? Brilliant poem tho! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biddo Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 first off lay off the emo music go and try and seek the humour in life , secondly, every one feels lonely at times, they want love etc... so deal with it. i get lonely too so i pray for a wife etc and some one in my life. yes i have high standards and i demand myself to meet them. so set goals for ure self. this is also sometimes selfish sometimes u get so wrapt up about ure own pain u fail to see the big wide picture and thats when u make the mistake of self pity dont pity ureself for pain and suffering is only tempermental not gonna last, ure a young women make ure time count study hard get the papes travel and be respected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 7, 2007 Author Share Posted October 7, 2007 er... i dont self pity myself i made this poem at a time when i was just ditched by an ex for another girl. and ive lost many friends to suicide lately. so yeah, id say i do feel lonely. and the pain of losing someone never goes away. and emo music? i listen to techno, pop and rap. not emo music. sterotypical much. and girl - i havent got a diagnosis for depression. thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
talesoffate Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 Excellent poem sis. Er, Biddo, How do you like being judged? You tell me Do your high standards include English eitquette? Or do you not know the difference between your and you're? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 7, 2007 Author Share Posted October 7, 2007 Thank you bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
annie24 Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 let's keep this on topic. nice poem sarey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biddo Posted October 11, 2007 Share Posted October 11, 2007 yeh ok no disrespec intended. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 Your amazing Sarey, thats all you need to believe, its ok to suffer and everyone will suffer, being lonely is a horrible feeling when it consumes you. Great work sweetie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 12, 2007 Author Share Posted October 12, 2007 thankyou ABD, I really appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel_baby Posted October 13, 2007 Share Posted October 13, 2007 That is an amazing poem! Well written, you have a great talent! And only at 14, wow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted October 13, 2007 Author Share Posted October 13, 2007 lol, I seem to get that alot. Thanks Angel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
comfyshoes Posted November 3, 2007 Share Posted November 3, 2007 i feel this down to my bones, kiddo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted November 4, 2007 Author Share Posted November 4, 2007 that's not a good thing comfy hun x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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