renaissancewoman101 Posted September 28, 2007 Share Posted September 28, 2007 Tears fall Eyes raised to the heavens. a thin, strangled voice utters "why" a heartwrenching sob, a muttering of prayers, darkness falls. the darkness of night the eternal dark of the night. fears abound, tears at the soul, weakness springs eternal. the eternity of night, night that never ends, eternal darkness why? A ray of light shines down slowly, soft, warm light that does not blight. Falls on thy face, covered with thy tears, a voice utters forth, I be with you always, trust in me, for I shall be your light. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ophelia- Posted September 28, 2007 Share Posted September 28, 2007 Thanks a lot renaissancewoman, reading your poem made me feel that there are people out there who are struggling with problems just like me. I am currently in tears, I have a headache. I feel the darkness and I see no end to it. I hope I can see that light.. I loved your poem, keep it up girl. Thanks again.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
renaissancewoman101 Posted September 28, 2007 Author Share Posted September 28, 2007 I'm glad you like my poetry. I write when I am thoughtful. I don't always see the light. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roachy Fischer XD Posted May 11, 2022 Share Posted May 11, 2022 This makes me want to go fishing. Long live Blake Shelton!!!!!! Thanks, RanchsauceWoman101!!🤗🇱🇷🥸🍱 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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