natalie121687 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 lustful and devious it enters my mind followed by perplexity a secret i am too somber to state. don't you know, i've sewed lips shut for you? it's ripping through my veins, tearing through my brain rushing through my mind, my body, and my soul. yet you continue to hold your hand over my mouth from miles away. you could care less that this is ruining me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadGenius Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 I'm sensing you are upset about something? A dark secret? Nice poem though. Evocative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 I really like it, alot of passion and emotion in it. Always makes good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
niczeegs Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 Oooooh - I loved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFallenShadow Posted September 27, 2007 Share Posted September 27, 2007 very well spoken.... but we all live with secrets...and yes some can be quite destructive,to ourselves especailly if we know the other person just doesnt care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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