sarey Posted September 14, 2007 Share Posted September 14, 2007 Staring, breathing, planning, thinking. I'm living life, living till I die, death coming soon, this time, I lose. Biting, chewing, my nails, scratching, itching, the scars that'll never heal. Soul and heart, both broken, tears shredding, mind shattering, I'm fading away. Grabbing the rope, snatching the pills, finding the blade, and everything that kills. Swollowing the pills, tightening the rope, slicing my wrists, with the metal. The blood drips, my eyes bloodshot, it didn't take so long, I lie on the floor, and I'm gone, forever, and ever. I'm gone now, the burden disappeared, you can all lead a better life now, not a person to shred a tear, smiles all around, when my death is found. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarey Posted September 14, 2007 Author Share Posted September 14, 2007 Thanks Stu, I appreciate the offer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
niczeegs Posted September 14, 2007 Share Posted September 14, 2007 That was amazing. Although we may all not admit it, but everyone feels this way sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dnttellmelies Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 i have to tell you that there is no way that one person hasn't felt this desperate sometimes. i will say it is a constant battle in my head over this very thing and i don't voice my feelings as often as i should. thank you for saying what i could and cannot. -ash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 23, 2007 Share Posted September 23, 2007 That was really deep and wonderful. Your really good at expressing your feelings in poetry. You have a great talent you really do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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