AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 12, 2007 Share Posted August 12, 2007 I haven't been through any abuse and don't think i have. I just have dreams and thoughts and when stuff takes over my brain this is what happens. And sometimes I wonder why, I let time keep on passing by, No matter how much pain I feel, I never let out as much as a sigh. When everyone just wants to lie, You don't care when it’s from harm I so loudly cry, You wouldn't stop, You would rather laugh as I slowly die. And when around me these tears do crash, So far away I try to dash, Screaming for you to stop, But you just give me another slash. I look about my feet, Its you again I’m about to meet, I'm so terrified, I try to hide beneath the sheet. You strip the bed bare, With just one wipe, This is so unfair, It’s my body you begin to swipe. Naked and alone, Not knowing whether you will be back, I feel like a clone, Not a person just a sack. Just a body, Just a toy, Just an object, Just a ploy. Now all that’s left, Is a messed up child, Trying to do as you ask, Anything for an attempt at love so mild. Everything I never wanted to be, Is what I have become, Everything I laugh at when I see, Hiding never was much fun. And when I back away, From your slightest touch, When I try to stray, It’s because the memories are too much. Now the ones I love blame themselves, For all the running away I do, But it’s not their fault, It’s all because of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girl friend Posted August 12, 2007 Share Posted August 12, 2007 Wow, Sensitive, great use of empathy. Stunning as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 13, 2007 Author Share Posted August 13, 2007 Thankyou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
still hurting Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 wow...very touching Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 13, 2007 Author Share Posted August 13, 2007 Thanks i'm glad people are liking it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFallenShadow Posted August 13, 2007 Share Posted August 13, 2007 Very well written and conveyed...i do enjoy reading your writtings...keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
still hurting Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 As I go through this difficult time in my life I keep on coming back to read this poem. It is like you ripped my chest open to expose what was in my heart and you put it all on paper...thank you, I am still finding it difficult to articulate what is in my heart and you portrayed it so well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 15, 2007 Author Share Posted August 15, 2007 Thankyou. Still Hurting, I am very sorry you feel like that. I'm sure you can get through it though.. Fallen, Thanks i love your writings too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
indigo_scar Posted August 16, 2007 Share Posted August 16, 2007 It's amazing how well you managed to empathise with this sort of situation. Really well done. I enjoy to read your poems. Keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 18, 2007 Author Share Posted August 18, 2007 Thankyou indigo I love reading your comments, they are always so kind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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