still hurting Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 There is so much pain And so many tears As I recall the horrible memories Of my teenage years I was only 15 You stole all that I had My innocence, my virginity Do you even feel bad? I thought it was my fault You called it an affair You knew you were hurting me Do you even care? All the memories They hurt so much The nights I had to endure Your perverted and unnatural touch I put on a smile To mask all the pain Through all of my suffering What did you gain? I feel all alone In this world of sin But I'll never tell So I guess you win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KellyWyndham Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 this is really amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 Thats really beautiful... I'm sorry you had to endure that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
indigo_scar Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 A really well written poem, but thats awful what happened. Your last bit- 'but i'll never tell', you know it's NEVER too late to tell. You deserve justice. They don't have to win. Perhaps you feel it was too long ago, or don't feel like anyone would believe you. But they would. The person that did this to you doesn't deserve to get away with it. I hope you are okay. x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
still hurting Posted August 9, 2007 Author Share Posted August 9, 2007 Thank you. This was my first poem and I was starting to get nervous because no one was commenting! I took a literature class in school a few years ago, but was never very good at the poetry part of it. I recently got a journal to start writing down my feelings about my abuse and it just flowed onto the paper so easily. It feels good to finally find away to articulate everything going on in my head. I have written a few more, but they are pretty graphic so I'll just keep those to the journal. Thanks again guys/gals! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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