downward spiral Posted August 1, 2007 Share Posted August 1, 2007 I am fading, Fading from view Being erased by time, dried up by the sun like the morning dew. A cascade of thoughts, nothing makes sense. Constant pain behind my eyes, and colors have lost their brilliance. It use to be clear, this purpose of living. Eternal happiness Through the joy of giving. Someway, somewhere The colors have become grey. Lost in this world of lies, I am but an obscurity. I have become a shadow a silhouette of what I used to be. The life inside is gone, There is nothing left inside me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
downward spiral Posted August 1, 2007 Author Share Posted August 1, 2007 Thanks STU, I have read some of yours that you have posted as well, very visceral. Very enjoyable and brings on emotions to the reader. If you can inflict an emotion on ONE reader with your written word, you have accomplished your task as a writer, that is my belief. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ellie2006 Posted August 1, 2007 Share Posted August 1, 2007 DS, This is the second poem that I've read of yours and I loved both! I look forward to reading more of your work ... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
downward spiral Posted August 2, 2007 Author Share Posted August 2, 2007 Thank you, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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