downward spiral Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 Holding on to all thats hollow whos with me and who will follow take a bite and sleep with fear never mind, its just a tear close your eyes and start a flame put to rest all the shame raise your hands and fly away leave yourself just for the day Now the dreams are all inside strike the demon kill his pride paint a smile on your face all the colors do not waste all the confusion in your head twisted thoughts lay to bed jump and spread your wings and do away with troubled things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted July 31, 2007 Share Posted July 31, 2007 I love it, it's really deep and I've felt like that many times I can really relate to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
downward spiral Posted July 31, 2007 Author Share Posted July 31, 2007 Thank you Moon Goddess, I enjoy greatly when I get feedback, wether negative or positive, although of course positive is much better. I have read some of yours and you to have written some very viceral material. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 1, 2007 Share Posted August 1, 2007 Thats really beautiful! I love how you capture the emotions. Loving it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
downward spiral Posted August 1, 2007 Author Share Posted August 1, 2007 Thank you Another Broken Doll. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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