ll Deviant ll Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 ok so Im having this put in a book for a poetry contest, I guess if people like it I'll post more of whats going to be in my book, tell me what you think: The Kiss A warm embrace standing face to face cheek to cheek her hair smells so sweet, "I love your sharp brown eyes your long black lashes your perfect straight nose and your full lips to match it" her stare was twice as luscious as her jet black hair, and it intensified as I began to explore, each and every facial contour, mapping out with careful measure the direction in which I would be taking her pleasure. I asked her to let her mouth be as open as her mind, then as open as her knees, I wanted her to be free to cum and go as she pleased. The moment built to such a hight it almost exploded, Impact was eminent, lips cocked locked and loaded. then finally we collided in earth shattering disorganized precision, gripping, ripping, tongues battling in rythem, lips smacking with them, it was a worth happening decision taking place in a time frame within dusk and dawn, we became the axis that the earth spun on. JCP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seaneKY Posted July 16, 2007 Share Posted July 16, 2007 Full of imagery. I like it. I can really put myself 'THERE'. Thanks for sharing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ll Deviant ll Posted July 17, 2007 Author Share Posted July 17, 2007 thanks seaneKY, I appreciate your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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