Poem for my spirit family

[Sugar-Rush]

It's my grandads funeral tomorrow nearly a year after my dads

I wrote this today to read out in the service do you think its okay?

 

 

I believed in always

never saying goodbye

I believed in forever

We'd never die

 

I believed it happened

Just not to us

I just saw them crying

Making a fuss

 

Now life has changed

It's easy to see

Things can never be the same

for you or me

 

Times a healer

people keep saying

Yet for that day

I'm still praying

 

Gods own plan

or so i'm told

he takes them away

out of our hold

 

Now they're protected

In everlasting bliss

no pain for them

for the people we miss

 

The angels that surround us

so easy to see

they're not strangers or saints

There my family

[HealingHandsWarmHeart]

First, I'm so sorry for your losses.

 

Your poem is beautiful.

 

but i have one question ...and I'm assuming its a typo... the 2nd to last line

 

"the not strangers or saints"

 

did you mean "they're" not strangers or saints"?

[Sugar-Rush]

yes i did, fixed now x

[Lanana]

It's my grandads funeral tomorrow nearly a year after my dads

I wrote this today to read out in the service do you think its okay?

 

 

I believed in always

never saying goodbye

I believed in forever

We'd never die

 

I believed it happened

Just not to us

I just saw them crying

Making a fuss

 

Now life has changed

It's easy to see

Things can never be the same

for you or me

 

Times a healer

people keep saying

Yet for that day

I'm still praying

 

Gods own plan

or so i'm told

he takes them away

out of our hold

 

Now they're protected

In everlasting bliss

no pain for them

for the people we miss

 

The angels that surround us

so easy to see

they're not strangers or saints

There my family

 

I think you should focus the poem more on that your family member being an angel. Not just on your pain- but write a poem on his life, dedicate it to him. It would make more sense.