vp83 Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 Tonight I didn't choose to run Oh, blind sniper What have I done... Even beside you I am aimless So I watch you, aimless one As your bullets break the sky Smashing into stars And I can't even try I find myself here wishing I could live with such precision I find myself here wishing I could live with each decision I find myself here wishing Upon each and every star Until they're murdered by your bullets In galaxies afar (And the moon just watches. Half a man. The other half silhouetted against the burning rain The war-torn sky. Only those who look hard enough can see his other half Only those who care to dream) So, I find myself here placing Broken stars upon the shelf I find myself wishing a lot But I never find myself And I spit at you, crescent moon... Why can't you turn my tide You just watch blind snipers' Bullets and stars collide Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooke657 Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 Wow, great poem. I wish I could write poems but I'm just no good at it but clearly you are so keep it up. I think it's awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vp83 Posted June 24, 2007 Author Share Posted June 24, 2007 I appreciate it But, I think you can write. I think anybody can. It might not even sound good to you when it's done. It doesn't matter to me. If you like to write, just do it. If you don't want to, you don't even ever have to show it to anyone. Try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brooke657 Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 I can write like speeches but anything involving creativity is like umm no lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vp83 Posted June 24, 2007 Author Share Posted June 24, 2007 Well, you never know.. I know for me I have to be in the right mindset, or anything I write ends up being total junk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ButterflyWrists Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 THAT IS AN AMAZING POEM!?! *wishes i was as good as you* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vp83 Posted June 26, 2007 Author Share Posted June 26, 2007 Well, thanks for the kind words. It's one of my favorite ones that I've written, but not because I think it's good. I'm surprised anyone actually liked it. Much appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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