Senna Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 It was like reopening a wound, as I sat there waiting.. knowing any minute l would see her again her l hadn't seen for so many years her who meant the world to me l should've been happy but l could feel the tears brimming lt had been so long l was beginning to feel the pains again no one could understand why l was crying l was about to see her l should've been smiling the sorrow felt by her absense was creeping out from deep inside in long kept tears ..and then she came like l'd seen her only yesterday that hug said nothing of the years l've longed to hold her we sat down she chatted and laughed l was oblivious to the conversation l kept looking at that hand that l hadn't felt for so long and marvelling at the fact it was in mine agian l remember leaving her having to go and say goodbye it was to much l'd turn my back ashamed of the tears trying,trying to control my pain like i'd managed to all those years but l couldn't so l walked away just one last glance back at the woman l loved most in the world l quickly ran out l wanted to go back hug one last time but the pain was to much l had to get out control myself re-bury those tears,hide the pain,forget the sorrow ..and later when l peered out of the aeroplain window and watched her world slip further away l looked at down at my hand where hers had once been but now was gone and l wondered if l'd ever have it there again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
buffalosoldier Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 Thats a good poem,i can relate to that one.did you think it up yourself?where did you get the inspiration? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted September 26, 2003 Share Posted September 26, 2003 hey wow i really liked the emotion within it, filled completely with the thoughts and fears we have of meeting and longing for one person again. youve given inspiration to me though, you went back to see someone you loved (if even in the poem not real life). dont loose her, go get her, go and meat her again if taking reality. if not it was a great poem and thanks for sharing it kel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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