Daddy Bear Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 no day will ever be too long nor can any night be black for you and I will speak such a language, rarely heard with diamond rope we lash our rafts together tight my food, my clothing, they are yours you would bleed for me we know tell no one that we own the sun their need is to misunderstand just take my hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amberr Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 What a gorgeous poem! A lot of good imagery. It has a lot of personal meaning to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brando Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Nice job SB. I like with diamond rope we leash our rafts together tight..... also love the line such a language rarely heard. Much said in such a short poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElektraHere Posted June 9, 2007 Share Posted June 9, 2007 Somebloke, the imagery your poem evoked in my mind is just wonderful. This poem is absolutely beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 Agreed with all he above. Beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blazer Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 Beautifully written S.B., you didn't waste one single word ... sentimental and pure. I really enjoyed reading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted June 11, 2007 Author Share Posted June 11, 2007 My humble thanks to all of you. It was born in a rare fleeting moment of inspiration and clarity. Greetings to old ENA friends Brando and EH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cimmie Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 I liked this a lot, somebloke. Very evocative and atmospheric... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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