hello-I-am-me Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 it didn't work but i feel better my life is worse but i feel better I never knew being alone was just as good as being together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fisch Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 Nice, I think they would make good pop lyrics. I hope you dont find that offensive because I dont mean it to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hello-I-am-me Posted June 20, 2007 Author Share Posted June 20, 2007 thnx, thta was my second try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vp83 Posted June 20, 2007 Share Posted June 20, 2007 I like it. It's simple, it's not wordy, it gets the point accross and it has an emotional touch. Very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
indigo_scar Posted June 25, 2007 Share Posted June 25, 2007 I like it! It short and to the point. It's nice as it is, but i reckon you could try adding to it. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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