a few poems from me

[demons-princess]

i havent been on in months but heres some new ones ive made since ive been gone ive kept up with my writting like you all said i should

 

BLUE RIBBONS FOR C.A

1.beating,shaking,crying,yelling

every year the number of abused children rises

so theyve made blue ribbons against child abuse

and these ribbons should come in good use

a 5 year old reported dead

beaten because he wet the bed

a 8 year old beaten to death

his mother was reported to be on crystal meth

so theyre making blue ribbons for child abuse

and like i said they should come in good use

so less children have to lie

and so less children have to die

BLACK

2.the walls are painted black

there are no carpets but the wooden floors are painted black

and if you look far in the back

you will see a boy

hes only 12 or 13

hes hard to find but can definatley be seen

hes in the corner curled in a ball

trying so hard to escape it all

his parents cruel

the kids mean

this whole thing is a horrible scene

his nails long and dirty

like the ones on an old birdie

so if you look in the back

of this room painted completley black

you will see a boy who is only 12 or 13

whos hard to find but can definatley be seen!

 

tell me what you think about them plz

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

That are beautiful.. Very sad though. I hate watching people and knowing that they aren't happy especially when it comes down to domestic violence child abuse or bullying. Its not fair and more methods need to be put in place to stop it. No one should have to go through being treated like that.

 

I loved your poems they spoke the truth and had great emotion to them. Keep it up.